A Prisoner Of His Pain

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Reviewing - "A Prisoner oF His Pain"

from LOOPERMAN Album

I am "A Prisoner Of His Pain"

— It would be cooler and more effective if the song started AFTER the 2X Prisoner of Pain refrain. The vocals do not match the music, and seem to be off key as well. No drums or bass, or just really buried.? A little schizophrenic, not really cohesive, no theme. And the lead guitar does not make up for it. I guess this is a demo. This song is definitely not up yo your usual standards. More of a solid rhythm guitar with overdubbed lead, more and louder basic bass, and definitely louder drums. Have you thought of just being instruments? Would love to hear that. Like and have reviewed other songs, always seem to have a different vocalist.

Reviewed by Peter Raymond-Solo Advanced Today

United States, New York, New York

Baccambarus

— Hi had good listen to your song, nice guitar sound, production great, vocals a bit repetitive, not sure what direction you are going in either metal or just rock keep writing dude

Reviewed by Peter Brady Beginner Today

England, Ormskirk Lancashire

— hi friend nice song keep the good work hope can listen more from you keep rocking \m/ never give up ok keep invite to know my work to www.shadowsofluna.com www.luissenodesign.com hope we see you one day in portugal give a gig for we all enjoy your music keep in tuch ok i am designer if yu need a cover for your albuns speak with me ok keep the good work

Reviewed by shadows of luna Beginner Today

Portugal, lisboa sintra

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Reviewed by iron devil Beginner Yesterday

Bulgaria, dobrich

Awesome stuff!

— Straight forward and driving song. Love the riffs. I like how you switch between letting the vocals and guitar take turns speaking in the song. Some really good talent going on here!

Reviewed by Along Came The Flood Beginner Yesterday

United States, Rhode Island, Cranston

Not my style

— Too many parts that is not connected proberly, the lyrics i just one sentence. I don liked it not my style the artist have to work on the lyrics and try to put the different parts together

Reviewed by Scarbite Beginner Today

Sweden, Malmoe

2 different styles

— I would say together they just don't sound like they should go together. However I could feel the talent on each element. The guitarist definitely has some talent as well as the vocalist. But they sound like they are doing 2 different songs. Maybe they recorded in different locations? Also, I think the vocals has too much added, doesn't give that natural raw feeling the guitars give. Definite potential though!

Reviewed by The Recasts Beginner Today

United States, Texas, San Antonio

Good demo

— I'm gonna take this review one item at a time. Rhythm guitars are out of tune and too quiet but have a nice groove that will be nice to hear- may consider layering the rhythm guitars for a fuller sound. Drum mix was ok hihats a little loud and a bit too much echo on snare. Lead guitar was very good! Lead tone was good- full and rich maybe quiet it while vocals are going on though otherwise very fluid legato-very nice! Vocal tone was very good and interesting a few pitch problems but mostly very good! Vocals mix was pretty good- I could understand the lyrics well. The intro was a little abrupt. Transitions are rough a good drum fill will help signal change between pieces although some transitions were very clear. Changing the drum beat during different pieces would go along way to help listener distinguish between different sections. A lot of potential- lead guitar was great and very good rock vocals! Most of the issues I mentioned can be worked out easily but it sounds like this song is made with a passion and excitement! Great job!

Reviewed by Coldrain Beginner Today

United States, Missouri, moberly

Whoa!

— Not sure if that's on purpose! Timing is really off. The voice doesn't sound bad necessarily, just out of sink with the rest of the music. I couldn't tell if the music was actual instruments or not. Hard to distinguish the instruments from one another. Maybe because of the way it was recorded? Needs to be cleaned up by a professional.

Reviewed by MANDOWN Beginner Today

United States, Ohio, Blanchester

Lots of things going on...

— This song "A Prisoner of his Pain" is very interesting. Some great guitar skills, are noticed right of the bat. The song is a little disconnected, but that may be what the artist was going for with the sound. Very unique way of doing a Rock Song. Not what I would usual pick, but I will say it is good and very interesting. Keep Rocking! Extra point for the vocals, pretty cool!

Reviewed by Edward Westbrook Beginner Today

United States, North Carolina, Raleigh

A Prisoner Of His Pain

— There could be enormous potential hidden in this song. Obviously skill and talent are at work here. With the help of an experienced producer I think APOHP could be polished up and transformed into a real gem. In it's present state APOHP suffers from low production value, but that could very easily be fixed. All the elements are present, they just need to be rearranged in their proper order. Once that is complete, APOHP will truly come to life.

Reviewed by Amplifryer Beginner Today

Canada, British Columbia, Nelson BC

A Prisoner of His Pain

— This is a nice effort, but it needs a remix. Kick drum and bass guitar need to be at the same level. Guitar and snare need to be at the same level, and the voice should sit just slightly on top of this. The vocal and guitar are burying the rest of the song. Listen to how Jimmy Page mixed the Zeppelin songs. He was a guitar god and always mixed his guitar back while letting the drums and bass ensure the rhythm track was the driving force. Also, the treatment of the vocals here further reinforces the concept of setting them back in the mix, due to there being so much reverb/echo on them. Mixing them back would give the song a fuller stereo spectrum, and a greater cohesiveness. In conclusion: there are two songs fighting with each other here. By remixing with these 'guides' this will become ONE bigger, fuller song. I hope this helps! The rhythm section is the cake; the guitar and vocals are the frosting. Here it is backwards. Go lightly with the frosting. -Kieron

Reviewed by CELESTiAL TiTANiUM Beginner Today

United States, Oregon, Grants Pass

Heartfelt

— "Prisoner of his pain" is powerful and heartfelt - and: a melody in a metal song! Great! - Will listen to more from this Italian band - The imagery in the title comes thru.

Reviewed by Bruce Thomas Smith Beginner Today

United States, Oregon, Seaside

thoughts

— What I really think we'll I thought that the song has great potential it's just needs these two key elements to happen and this is just my opinion first you need to make the song believable so we as the people can feel it second put you lyrics in the pocket and that just for you to move them in the right place overall it's good peace. CaNy Entertainment

Reviewed by CaNy Entertainment PRO Today

United States, California, pasadena

Rock Hard!

— This song gives a powerful rush of energy thru guitar riffs. With it's wild and psyco sound, this song will have you locked up for life. The moody, mid-tempo emphasizes the fact that, songs have turned more narrative and descriptive they’ve become more emotionally vague. Pretty much every tune here sees him pining for some mystical, unattainable woman, but with all the hazy cosmic jive about being "shot from the sun like a bullet from a gun" and "dreaming about a revolution" and a "girl who electrifies the storm,".own, its restraining-order-worthy come-on—"You say you need love/ Just like a kid on crack"—

Reviewed by Dead Blood_usa Beginner Today

United States, New York, Dallas/Fort Worth

A Blast From The Past!

— Oh, man! Another great tune from "Baccambàrus" - an avant-garde metal/rock project that seems to do everything. This specific song, though, it has that 80's feeling like I'm listening to "No Easy Way Out" by Robert Tepper w/a bit of Def Leppard influence or something like that. Again, very great tune, I would hope to hear more tracks in the future to be kind of like this with that old-school vibe to it. Nostalgia hits me right away when I listen to this track and that's a good thing. The only drawback I would say is there isn't enough different vocal/lyrical verses going on, so it doesn't have as much as an impact as the rest of the instrumental has on me, but that' just me. Overall, overall....great song and am looking forward to hearing more from this artist! \m/\m/

Reviewed by Stollo Beginner Yesterday

United States, North Carolina, Raleigh

A Prisoner of His Pain Review

— A Prisoner of His Pain is very dark, with with washed out , in cave like vocals which while haunting have no particular melody rather a moaning. Coupled with trippy guitar fills I plenty. This is experimental, post punk psychodeliia on a bad trip in a dark mood. Not the best of mixes

Reviewed by Lee Williams Beginner Yesterday

United States, California, Antioch

Timing...

— Hello! My first reaction is that there are a lot of timing issues. It feels like some vocals were cut and pasted but not put into proper groove. The singer sounds like he has a good voice but he is singing to a melody that does not match the key of the music underneath. I think the concept of the song is cool but the song needs major cleaning and some major structure work. Its hard to follow. Again I feel there is a lot of great elements to be worked with... I am by no means trashing the song but I don't feel like its a song just yet. Keep working it and I hope you realize this is just my opinion. If you are truly happy with it and you feel you reached your vision then you were successful. I think deep inside you know the song still needs a lot of work. I say these things out of support and not harm. My music needs work as well. Good luck to you and keep on writing!

Reviewed by Brandon Bentley Beginner Yesterday

United States, Texas, Austin

A Prisoner Loves Pain

— Good passion, I'm a pop guy so the genre doesn't work for me. Might shredding but need to review your objectives and song length if you want to aim for radio. Continue working at it.

Reviewed by Scott Driscoll Beginner Yesterday

Canada, Ontario, Scarborough

It's okay..

— I believe if this had more quality I think it would of sound better. Not my type of music, I mean it sounds good but it's sounds off to me. In my personal opinion it would sound better instrumental.. My opinion

Reviewed by Melissa Starfall Beginner Yesterday

United States, Florida, Naples

Checked out 'Prisoner Of His Pain' 3-5-2015

— Jumps in well with the vocals and some dirty guitar. Great bass line with the drums holding it down. Guitar pick slide with some sammy bar action? Sounds good. Creative guitar licks work well. Every now and then the vocals and the lyrics seem to miss the beat but the guitar work brings you back to the groove. 'Make up your mind' drop off enters a really good guitar solo. Vocals could be tighter in the groove. Nice fade out (outro)

Reviewed by HED SHOPPE Beginner Yesterday

United States, Colorado, colorado springs

MADFEET

— Bonjour et jolie découverte de votre formation sur number one music, j'aime bien ce que vous faites, ça change de l'ordinaire, je trouve le son très correct et la voix me fait penser aux chanteurs des années 1975 - félicitation pour votre musique - A bientôt sur le site

Reviewed by madfeet Beginner Yesterday

France, arcis sur aube

review

— sound jumbled everything but the idea is fantastic and I love the song because quite understand what you want to express musically, but it all sounds very separate and needs better mix, requires a mixture attach all instruments and is done.I see emotive riffs, and leads to full, and a very good voice heavy rock.

Reviewed by Alfredo proyect Beginner Yesterday

Uruguay, Ciudad De Montevideo